5. 今天小編為考生帶來(lái)了托福寫作范文學(xué)習(xí)：高速公路vs城市交通。考生們快和小編一起看看范文里都是怎么寫的吧。

Highways or public transportation, which should be given preferential financing?

Should governments spend more money on improving roads and highways, or should governments spend more money on improving public transportation (buses, trains, subways)? Why? Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.

高分范文賞析

As China continues along the road of economic development, new demands are being put on the transportation infrastructure of the country. This is particularly evident in the cities, where daily traffic jams are unavoidable facts of life. Faced with a mounting traffic crisis, I believe the government should focus on improving public transportation instead of improving roads and highways. Public transportation is cheaper, better for the environment, and a better long-term solution for meeting the transportation demands of the future. The traffic crisis in large cities is mainly due to the increase in the number of private cars on the road. If 30 people each drive their own private cars to work in the morning, polluting emissions from these 30 cars pollute the air. Having 30 extra cars on the road not only means more traffic, it also means that all cars on the road will run their engines longer to produce more pollution while they idle in traffic jams. On the contrary, if those same 30 people take the bus to work, there would be less traffic, and even less pollution.

More bus and subway lines would also save much space now wasted on parking lots, which makes sense from both environmental and city-planning perspectives. Investment in public transportation also makes sense for the customer. The most expensive public transportation in the city costs about 5 yuan. Two trips across the city every day for a whole year would still be less than a fifth of the cost of a new car, not to mention the inevitable expenditure of maintaining a good performance of the car. Taking into account the considerable upkeep expenses of a car, gas, insurance, and repairs, owning a car is much less economic and convenient than is taking the bus or the subway.

While some people would argue that investing money on highways is imperative for holistic benefits of our country, I personally believe the need for solving current traffic disasters that are prevalent in most such major cities as Beijing, Shanghai, and Guangzhou is more urgent. The problem has already become the biggest headache of local governments and their residents, and would cost even more if not handled promptly.

托福作文寫作有哪些萬(wàn)能方法？

認(rèn)真審題

在做題的時(shí)候切記不要太著急掃一眼題目就開始寫。托福的作文題目中不會(huì)出現(xiàn)生僻的字眼，所以很少會(huì)出現(xiàn)讀不懂題的情況。只要你認(rèn)真讀題了，審題這一關(guān)就沒有問題。

精心安排文章結(jié)構(gòu)

考生要抓住美人的思維，這樣才能以不變應(yīng)萬(wàn)變。托福寫作通常是一個(gè)五段三點(diǎn)式的寫作，通常我們也叫魚骨頭式：開頭段+論述段+結(jié)尾段。托福寫作考查的也就是考生是否會(huì)熟練運(yùn)用這樣的結(jié)構(gòu)去表達(dá)自己對(duì)一個(gè)問題的看法。所以我們看到題目的時(shí)候要馬上構(gòu)思確定自己的觀點(diǎn)，不管同意哪方都沒關(guān)系，重要的是能夠馬上確定自己的觀點(diǎn)，搜集腦海中的支撐。這一思維也體現(xiàn)在綜合寫作中，綜合寫作的模式性也比較強(qiáng)。閱讀和聽力都是對(duì)應(yīng)的，即三三相反式。掌握了美人的這種出題思維，拿的可能性就比較大。