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高考英語作文錯(cuò)誤一:漢式英語
(誤) Good good study, day day up.
(正) Study hard and you’ll make progress every day
(誤) There is a notice in the park, saying:“To take notice of safe; slippery sideway ”
(正)There is a notice in the park, saying:“Watch your step. Slippery sideway. ”
方法點(diǎn)撥:要減少漢式英語必須做到:(1)養(yǎng)成用英語思維進(jìn)行寫作的習(xí)慣,注意中西文化差異所帶來的不同表達(dá);(2)平時(shí)多歸納總結(jié)、糾正漢式英語;(3)多讀原汁原味英語。
高考英語作文錯(cuò)誤二:關(guān)系不一致
(誤)In the bedroom there are a bed, a desk and a chair.
(正) In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.
高考英語作文錯(cuò)誤三:詞性混用
(誤)60﹪ of the students against the idea of entrance fees.
(正)60﹪ of the students are against the idea of entrance fees.
(誤)2 days past before his letter arrived.
(正)2 days passed before his letter arrived.
高考英語作文錯(cuò)誤四:重復(fù)累贅
(誤)The box is too heavy for the weak boy to carry it.
(正) The box is too heavy for the weak boy to carry.
(誤) We hope to improve our work better.
(正) We hope to improve our work.
方法點(diǎn)撥:有些英語單詞本身自帶某個(gè)意思,或由于英語語法需要不能再出現(xiàn)某一單詞,如果學(xué)生基本功不夠扎實(shí),就常常出現(xiàn)造句累贅現(xiàn)象。
高考英語作文錯(cuò)誤五:搭配不當(dāng)
(誤)Tom was in such a hurry that he forgot his schoolbag on the bus.
(正)Tom was in such a hurry that he left his schoolbag on the bus.
高考英語作文錯(cuò)誤六:無關(guān)聯(lián)詞
(誤)I am tired, I must go to bed.
(正)I am tired, so I must go to bed.
方法點(diǎn)撥:英語句子特點(diǎn)之一重“形合”,句子的各個(gè)部分由各種關(guān)聯(lián)詞聯(lián)在一起。而漢語句子重“意合”,句子前后連接主要是通過上下文的邏輯意義來實(shí)現(xiàn),很多學(xué)生在寫作時(shí)往往忽略這一點(diǎn)造成句子的錯(cuò)誤。
高考英語作文錯(cuò)誤七:邏輯不一致
(誤)There were 40 foreigners came to visit our school.
(正)There were 40 foreigners who came to visit our school.
(正)40 foreigners came to visit our school.
(誤)Without a friend will feel lonely.
(正)Without a friend one will feel lonely.
方法點(diǎn)撥:一個(gè)句子至少包括主語和謂語兩部分(除祈使句外),如果把句子的某一部分當(dāng)成一個(gè)句子,就會(huì)導(dǎo)致非完整句子。句子無論長短,在安排上要合乎邏輯,銜接自然,使句內(nèi)之間過渡自然、層次分明。而學(xué)生在習(xí)作中常出現(xiàn)未用過渡詞語、非平行結(jié)構(gòu)和語義不完整的分割句等錯(cuò)誤。
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