不少考生都說托福作文真的很難的，但是其實，只要大家認(rèn)真?zhèn)淇剂?，還是可以考取不錯的分?jǐn)?shù)的。下面小編送給大家一篇托福真題作文范文：工作到底為了什么。

托福寫作考些什么?

托福寫作包括兩部分，需在50分鐘的時間內(nèi)完成。

第一部分是綜合寫作，以閱讀和聽力材料為基礎(chǔ)的寫作試題，寫作時間為20分鐘。考生首先需要閱讀一篇學(xué)術(shù)篇章，閱讀的時間是3分鐘。然后文章隱去，考生需要聽一段大約為2分鐘左右的與閱讀主題相關(guān)的演講。之后考生需要針對閱讀和演講中的觀點作文，總結(jié)并說明演講的內(nèi)容與閱讀中觀點的關(guān)系，在20分鐘的時間內(nèi)完成一篇150~225字的文章。

第二部分是獨立寫作，需要考生根據(jù)自己的知識和經(jīng)驗陳述、解釋并支持對待某一問題的某個看法，考查綜合語言技能的作文題目的評分以回答的質(zhì)量、完整性和準(zhǔn)確性為依據(jù)。在30分鐘內(nèi)完成一篇300字以上的文章。

一般情況下如果你的時間充裕，小編建議大家能多寫盡量多寫，并不是網(wǎng)上有些人說的多寫怕出錯，小編認(rèn)為的多寫并不是沒話找話，這里講的多寫是要考生讓文章更加完整的情況下去填充內(nèi)容，讓寫作文章更加的豐富。

本話題高分范文賞析

One of the most overlooked reasons why people work is to help other people. Government officials, social and charity workers, and religious organizations, and others all work not only for their own salaries, but also work for the common good. They labor for others because of their moral convictions, for reasons of personalreciprocity, and because they want to make society more stable, thereby benefiting themselves and others. Some of the most famous charity workers in the world have been affiliated with religious groups. For instance, many of the foreigners living in the poor regions of Africa are doctors, teachers, and other professionals who are paid by religious organizations to help the poor, sick, and needy people there. These professionals could make much more money if they worked in rich countries. They have chosen to help poor people because they believe their religion tells them to help people who cannot help themselves. They are working for others for moral or religious reasons. Some people work for other people because at some time in their lives, someone else has helped them. Many teachers can tell stories about a particular teacher who changed their lives. The gift a great teacher gave to them inspired them to become teachers themselves. Likewise, many people become doctors because a doctor saved one of their family member's life and they felt like they owed a debt of gratitude that money could not repay. To such people, the motivation for working is not the paycheck at the end of the month, but the smile on a child's face when they read their first book, or the look of joy on new parents' faces when they see their healthy newborn baby. Finally, some people work for others because they believe that society is only safe and stable when all of its members are happy. These people include good government officials who try to make policies that benefit the poorer classes of society. They know that only by making policies that help poor people live richer, happier lives can they lower crime, sickness, and poverty rates, and make society safer and happier for all citizens.

托福寫作誤區(qū)有哪些：

1.是不是準(zhǔn)備幾個名人的例子就可以了？

并不是，首先要切題，如果題目說的對象是4-7歲的孩子，你舉個喬布斯的例子，就算偏題了。

其次，舉例子的重點是要先描述一個例子，然后表達你自己對于這個例子的看法和分析。并不要求使用名人、或者非常復(fù)雜的例子，閱卷人并不會按照論據(jù)的復(fù)雜性來看文章。

還有例子的表達不要啰嗦，不要像寫日記一樣，而且要地道。

所以，名人的例子或者個人的例子都可以，只要切題和語言表達地道就行。還要重點強調(diào)，在例子前面要有展開，先把道理論述清楚再舉例子，不能主題句寫完就寫例子，沒有展開分?jǐn)?shù)就不會有g(shù)ood，具體可以參考fair等級的描述。

2.托福寫作多寫就可以拿到高分

很多學(xué)生會疑惑自己文章練習(xí)挺多的了，但是為什么分?jǐn)?shù)卻一直上不去？

寫作不能閉門造車。首先，寫作要有大量的輸入，才能輸出，所以寫之前要有歸納。

建議大家分類準(zhǔn)備話題語料和表達，還有分類話題范文，想讓大家先記一些素材，仿寫一下范文，這樣大家在輸出的時候才會有話寫，不斷改進提高。

其次，寫完之后要總結(jié)。如果一味輸出，不去找自己的問題，不去改進，也很難得到提升。所以寫完之后一定要讓老師修改，不斷發(fā)現(xiàn)問題，總結(jié)問題，這樣才能事半功倍。